COREY+P.+HILDERBRAND

Corey-Payne-Hilderbrand-vocab 9-28-10

@Corey -Payne- Hilderbrand- convenotes ction 9-22-10

Corey -

Ah a girl after my own heart! Johnny Depp is my favorite too:)

You've got great sentences, but a few missing ending punctuations (highlighted). I love that you would like to life in Wonderland, but I'm wondering why else? Think of a few more good reasons, and include a concluding sentence to wrap it all up.

Visualize you and Johnny walking together through Wonderland:)

- Ms Lew 1. What is your favorite breakfast? My favorite breakfast is pancakes. 2. What is the title of a book you really enjoyed? The title of a book I enjoyed was Alice in Wonderland. 3. What is one movie you’ve liked this year? One movie i like this year is Alice in Wonderland. 4. What time do you wake up on school days? The time I wake up on school days is 6:00.am. 5. If you could live any PLACE, where would it be? If could live in anyplace it would be Wonderland. Because Wonderland is a place where any thing you dream of will be there waiting for you.If you go to wonderland you can eat cake that makes you taller then a mile high!Also eat cookeis thatmakes you smaller thana mouse!don;t forget to stop for tea with mad hater,but don't stay to long or you;'ll go as mad as him. ALSO SO DO NOT GO TO THE RED QUENN OR YOU MIGHT GET YOUR HERD CUT OFF FOR GO!!If you are lost in the woods you'll most likey meet chessathe cat with avaperating skills.He'll fix you up if you get cut.when you go in to the forest of nouck well don't go in or you'll meet the Jabberwalky and his not freindly ,but if you 'll make your way to mameryall the wihte qunee will welcome you with open arms! That is way I would like to live in wonderland!!! . If you could live any TIME, when would it be? If i could live in anytime it would be the mideviltime. 7. Where did you go to Kindergarten? I went to kinergarten at Farwell Schools. 8. What is your favorite school subject (not lunch or recess J )? My favorite school subject is Spainsh. 9. Which Celebrity (Actor, Athlete, Musician, Politician, etc.) Do you most admire? The actor i admire is Jonny Deep. 10. What career or job would you like to have when you’re my age (42)? The job I would like to have at 42 is astronamer.

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